Poetry Forum

What
is it
to be
without
garrote wire?

Where would
you, my lovelesser,
be?

I just checked it out on Microsoft Word and "garrotte" should be spelt like so. I also don't know what you mean by "lovelesser," though I suspect I'm not supposed to. A shiver went down my spine after I read this. I imagine it being narrated by a man who's standing over a woman's corpse. It's like a supremely twisted love poem, or a psychopath justifying his actions perhaps.

Thank you, Jack. I hate when that happens. :/