Poetry Forum

I hate to be a tart
but your lips are like
bitten invitations.

love it.
it's tacky without being tacky.
thanks for the read jadie.

It's love-acky. Lovely and tacky mixed with lust, but lust is only present in secret....Lol.

I love the phrase "bitten invitations." This is flippant and serious all at once. Thanks for the read Jade.

Short and sweet this one, perfectly done

Thank you both, very much.

Nice.
R.Y.