05-09-2023, 05:30 PM
05-15-2023, 11:50 AM
Speechless. Although I have to mention that this piece has a lot of bones and good imagery. I like the rhythm in this and it doesn't fail to go off meter. My concern for this poem is why is every letter capitalized.
05-16-2023, 02:03 PM
The “No, ‘twas her inner…” sounds off
Every line is an iamb, save this one.
Nice one.
Every line is an iamb, save this one.
Nice one.
05-24-2023, 08:45 AM
(05-15-2023, 11:50 AM)Poetry In Motion Wrote: [ -> ]Speechless. Although I have to mention that this piece has a lot of bones and good imagery. I like the rhythm in this and it doesn't fail to go off meter. My concern for this poem is why is every letter capitalized.
Thanks for reading all caps because I’m horrible when it comes to spelling and grammar so sometimes I capitalize sometimes other times no caps lol
(05-16-2023, 02:03 PM)busker Wrote: [ -> ]The “No, ‘twas her inner…” sounds off
Every line is an iamb, save this one.
Nice one.
Thanks for reading and taking time comment