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La Lune

Tonight’s red balloon
birthday moon was better
than any gift I could have
given you.
It's perfect Mark.

I like the internal rhyme that also rhymes with the title.
I was up at 4am to see it however it was cloudy, but this makes up for it.

Cheers for the read
Mark
(05-16-2022, 06:20 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: [ -> ]I was up at 4am to see it however it was cloudy, but this makes up for it.

Thanks Mark-

My wife & I got very lucky, and witnessed the totality of the lunar eclipse: a super flower blood moon, indeed.

It was a purely magical experience to share with her, on her birthday.

She deserved this nod from the heavens.