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Snow-peaked mountains way down to my room
knock me out south 
take me to stardust and to whisper the West behind 
ringing out I hardly knew you in dreams.
I cry because I remember your daddy's farm.
Disconnect the Honey
Georgia's always drifting away.
I can't say a silent prayer 
Ukraine girls really can only do these things
to tomorrow like dreamers do.
If I I awake and find a candy-colored dawn
gee, it's good you said goodbye.*

* This is a cut-up of the songs In Dreams & Back in the USSR
(05-14-2021, 12:46 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: [ -> ]Snow-peaked mountains way down to my room
knock me out south 
take me to stardust and to whisper the West behind 
ringing out I hardly knew you in dreams.
I cry because I remember your daddy's farm.
Disconnect the Honey
Georgia's always drifting away.
I can't say a silent prayer 
Ukraine girls really can only do these things
to tomorrow like dreamers do.
If I I awake and find a candy-colored dawn
gee, it's good you said goodbye.

Since this is for fun, I want to say that I liked it but you put two I's, just remove the other one and go from there. What did you mean by disconnect the honey? And why is it capitalized?