01-01-2016, 12:23 AM
House-shaped
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We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Depreciation his alone to bear.
Appreciation swells his sole net worth,
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years. So molded by its walls, he fits;
His house is comfortable, so is he.
But should he, childless, try to break its chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad but grimmer is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escaped
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors
Its former residents each claim to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Edit2
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests -
Depreciation’s his alone to bear;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained;
His house is comfortable, so is he.
But should he, childless, try to break its chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad or sadder is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escapes
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors
Its former residents each claim to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Edit1
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Pays tax directly, not through fee or rent.
Depreciation’s his to bear, repair;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained,
Made part of town and neighborhood, which change.
His house is comfortable, so is he;
But as he, childless, tries to break their chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad or sadder is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escapes
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors,
A shell trapped relatives contend to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Original version
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form or break, depending on
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Pays tax directly, not through fee or rent.
Depreciation’s his to bear, repair;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained,
Chained to its town and neighborhood, which change.
His house is comfortable, so is he;
But as he, childless, tries to break their chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad, or sadder, is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over, all its joy escaped
Like laughing gas or baby’s breath, reduced
To walls and cellars, plumbing, attics, floors,
Maintained with envy, gripped with empty hate.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, unless we melt we cannot leave,
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Blank verse; something of a song of experience. All comments and suggestions for improvement welcome.
Edit3
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Depreciation his alone to bear.
Appreciation swells his sole net worth,
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years. So molded by its walls, he fits;
His house is comfortable, so is he.
But should he, childless, try to break its chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad but grimmer is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escaped
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors
Its former residents each claim to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Edit2
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests -
Depreciation’s his alone to bear;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained;
His house is comfortable, so is he.
But should he, childless, try to break its chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad or sadder is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escapes
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors
Its former residents each claim to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Edit1
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form, break - all depends upon
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Pays tax directly, not through fee or rent.
Depreciation’s his to bear, repair;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained,
Made part of town and neighborhood, which change.
His house is comfortable, so is he;
But as he, childless, tries to break their chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad or sadder is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over. All its joy escapes
Like baby’s breath; too soon there’s nothing left
But walls and cellars, plumbing, attic, floors,
A shell trapped relatives contend to own.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, we cannot leave until we melt -
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Original version
We shape our buildings, and thereafter they shape us. - Winston Churchill, 1944
A home is not a trap, a house may be:
The home may form or break, depending on
Each person who arrives, abides, departs,
Who loves or hates, who dies or procreates.
Each one shapes home-life - but the house endures.
The single man who buys a house invests,
Pays tax directly, not through fee or rent.
Depreciation’s his to bear, repair;
Appreciation swells his sole net worth.
But if he never marries, fails to form
A family, his house fills with the dust
Of years, possessions, everything but trust
In others. He’s shaped by its walls, constrained,
Chained to its town and neighborhood, which change.
His house is comfortable, so is he;
But as he, childless, tries to break their chains,
Each book, each chair and etching forms a link
That binds him, owned by all the things he’s bought.
As sad, or sadder, is the fate of those
Whose family disintegrates but leaves
Their house of many years, once home, a prize
To be fought over, all its joy escaped
Like laughing gas or baby’s breath, reduced
To walls and cellars, plumbing, attics, floors,
Maintained with envy, gripped with empty hate.
We shape our houses, Churchill said, but then
They mold us. If the cast is too exact,
Too hard, unless we melt we cannot leave,
For we’re no longer shaped to pass their doors.
Blank verse; something of a song of experience. All comments and suggestions for improvement welcome.