Iamb the scissors you bastard :@
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The lungs inflate, the snot's sucked from your nose
a bloodied would be poet for the road
You blindly scream and think "Well I'll be blowed
some silly bastards messing with my toes"
It's then you start to write the master prose
but not before you shift a canny load;
the images you thought of all erode
umbilical is cut, a snip, you froze

you wasn't paralytic all that long;
and soon the critics gave their first insight
"The cock is small the head is fat, what's wrong?
"He's limp just like his dad the little mite."
"Yeah; full of shit, not even worth a song"
and so pared down and pruned you start the night.
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Look, billy's gone Petrarchan with his snot
-- I have to say, I'm really quite impressed
(but not enough to get myself undressed)
and mucus ain't the only thing he's got.
It may begin to seem there is a plot --
the free verse whores are getting quite distressed
at all these forms -- they're such a bloody test
and we iambics can't resist a shot

But is it only bill's ejaculate?
The screen is blurry but the words remain
and fluids notwithstanding, we insist
you take the time to fully contemplate
the "freedom" lost for such a massive gain...
at least I think it's true (I am quite pissed)
It could be worse
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(03-22-2013, 09:02 PM)Leanne Wrote:  Look, billy's gone Petrarchan with his snot
-- I have to say, I'm really quite impressed
(but not enough to get myself undressed)
and mucus ain't the only thing he's got.
It may begin to seem there is a plot --
the free verse whores are getting quite distressed
at all these forms -- they're such a bloody test
and we iambics can't resist a shot

But is it only bill's ejaculate?
The screen is blurry but the words remain
and fluids notwithstanding, we insist
you take the time to fully contemplate
the "freedom" lost for such a massive gain...
at least I think it's true (I am quite pissed)

I can't believe this thread was almost missed!
Bill runs around, a blind man with those scissors
Leanne is busy cracking off these whizzers
and really, you believe that she is pissed?
Don't bother stopping by to read this thread
you'll think "it's just those freaks practicing forms"
go back to cliche abstract free verse norms
and mark this one "off-topic", "junk" or "read"

But if you stayed and peered between the lines
you noticed Leanne mentioning her dress
(the challenge there, I really am distressed)
Leanne objects but she is looking fine
(and Billy scissor-scissors up a mess)
was: "not enough to get mySELF undressed"
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(03-22-2013, 09:02 PM)Leanne Wrote:  Look, billy's gone Petrarchan with his snot
-- I have to say, I'm really quite impressed
(but not enough to get myself undressed)
and mucus ain't the only thing he's got.
It may begin to seem there is a plot --
the free verse whores are getting quite distressed
at all these forms -- they're such a bloody test
and we iambics can't resist a shot

But is it only bill's ejaculate?
The screen is blurry but the words remain
and fluids notwithstanding, we insist
you take the time to fully contemplate
the "freedom" lost for such a massive gain...
at least I think it's true (I am quite pissed)

Vis-à-vis lines 4-7:

< Forminista's Lament >*

Ah yes! I crave that bygone day
When words were formed by writ;
Those golden days where none fell sway
To horrid chat and chit.

- - -

*Repeated?: yes; but at least the title's new.

almost terse
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