My daugher's 2nd crack at poetry
#1
It’s a poem
you love me
The milky waves is the love
the stars are bright
at night
when the wind blows
the trees blow
at night
when the love comes from you
will always be even better
like a godess
if you love me
even better
and I will love you
even better
then I used to.

Poem is mine.
love me poem.
made by Olivia P******
2013 Sat 16
Olivia age 6
Michael’s daughter.


This is her second attempt at age 6. I'm so proud. [insert teary-eyed emoticon here]

When she learned I was posting poem here, she insisted that I post hers. INSISTED. Would not take no as an answer. I love that kid.

Mikey.
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#2
Olivia, you are an amazing poet Smile

Always be a goddess.
It could be worse
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#3
A beautiful poem full of amazing pictures. I think my favorite line is
The milky waves is the love
the stars are bright
at night

Thank you for making your dad share this Olivia.

AJ.
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