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< the refrigerator >

but you
are reading this now
and as each word
coasts
through the air
directly
into your eye

you

who had hoped
when you started this
had hoped
like opening the door
had hoped
like looking
into
the refrigerator

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almost terse
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#2
Strong and apt imagery! Smile I really like the way you divided the poem up. Just not sure why there's a picture of a cat.
Back!
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#3
makes me hungry. is that the point?
I'll be there in a minute.
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#4
haha, this is so fun. definitely made me smile, and yep I get that fridge hope. ;D
oh and for me the fat cat is pretty apt! illustrates it well.
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The howling beast is back.
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#5
i feel so decieved Big Grin
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