Trash Birds
#1
Black wings, bags, 
cirrus clouds
wind round a white dwarf sun
like a carousel.


Caws, jeers,
wounded crows 
pierce the stilted cry
of a perched eagle.


The garbage truck backs away
as trash birds lunge
on their meal.
"Whenever is a really long never"
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#2
Black wings, garbage bags, 
and cirrus clouds
wind around a white dwarf sun
like a carousel.


Caws, and jeers,
of wounded crows 
pierced by the stilted cry
of a perched eagle.


The garbage truck backs away
as trash birds lunge
on their meal.

That's a play of things that occurred to me reading this poem.  

See the technical anomalies that occurred?

Black wings, garbage bags,
and cirrus clouds
wind around a white dwarf sun
like a carousel.


Caws and jeers,
of wounded crows
pierced by the stilted cry
of a perched eagle.


The garbage truck backs away
as trash birds lunge
on their meal.

Those technical anomalies, or what I've come to call trash birds, bother me a lot when copying and pasting in the areas that have the font tools and so forth.

I often have to paste into a Quick Reply of some random thread before I can paste in, say, a Draft of mine elsewhere, if I'm pasting something I wrote elsewhere.
The Quick Reply box is where I have to paste some things and recopy, what a word, recopy, from there, here, to a toolbar box.
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#3
(06-18-2022, 11:25 PM)rowens Wrote:  Black wings, garbage bags, 
and cirrus clouds
wind around a white dwarf sun
like a carousel.


Caws, and jeers,
of wounded crows 
pierced by the stilted cry
of a perched eagle.


The garbage truck backs away
as trash birds lunge
on their meal.

That's a play of things that occurred to me reading this poem.  

See the technical anomalies that occurred?

Black wings, garbage bags,
and cirrus clouds
wind around a white dwarf sun
like a carousel.


Caws and jeers,
of wounded crows
pierced by the stilted cry
of a perched eagle.


The garbage truck backs away
as trash birds lunge
on their meal.

Those technical anomalies, or what I've come to call trash birds, bother me a lot when copying and pasting in the areas that have the font tools and so forth.

I often have to paste into a Quick Reply of some random thread before I can paste in, say, a Draft of mine elsewhere, if I'm pasting something I wrote elsewhere.
The Quick Reply box is where I have to paste some things and recopy, what a word, recopy, from there, here, to a toolbar box.

It happens to me aswell, editing the trash birds out are annoying, but all you have to do is change the font size.

Thanks for the critique, appreciate it.
"Whenever is a really long never"
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