middle age senryu
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struggling to read
all i see these days
- eyebrows
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(05-12-2022, 01:14 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  struggling to read
all i see these days
- eyebrows

"Browfocals" would be a funny title.
"My mongoose is coming."
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I don't like giving these short poems titles, I'd rather just call it senryu but then there's loads of poems called that on this site so I'd never find it. Cheers
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#4
Hey other Mark-
I always appreciate these short ones.
I can agree that a title is not needed, as middle age is implied in the piece.
Especially for those of us who experience this.
Mark, too
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#5
Much appreciated Mark,
I'm glad that it resonated.
Cheers
Mark
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