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Ages ago
and young,
you were Orion
in my firmament.
But now, in a different
galaxy,
the sky has strange comets.
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Yowza!
This is superb.
“All persons, living or dead, are entirely coincidental.” Kurt Vonnegut
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Hey busker,
Orion is signified by three prominent, fixed stars and comets are "visitors".
Perhaps it's that your view of a steadfast person in your younger life now includes strange visitors in your older, "different galaxy". Or not. That's how I read it, although I may be seeing it from a parallel universe.
Thanks for this one, as it got me thinking beyond the space between my ears-
Mark
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Thanks, Mark, TqB
Mark - your interpretation is close what I had intended, although the association of comets with doom and death are also there, not intentionally, but just the way it came out