Something Tetaa Like That
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Something Tetaa Like That


You put your reading glasses on
you're dead
You suck your boyfriend's cock
you're dead
you smoked that smoke
you're dead
You're a god
You're dead
You're you 
You're dead
This works
You're dead
Makes sense 
You're dead
You're a child
You're dead
You're your child
You're dead
You cry and you piss and you moan
You're dead
You write to make yourself not dead
You're dead

Look in the mirror too long
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What is the meaning of the title? What is tetaa? One minor mistake though, on the third line, you forgot to put your instead of you. Anyway this a strange poem. You say you're a god, your a child, and then your dead, why?
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(07-31-2020, 07:36 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote:  What is the meaning of the title? What is tetaa? One minor mistake though, on the third line, you forgot to put your instead of you. Anyway this a strange poem. You say you're a god, your a child, and then your dead, why?

Tetaa means "goodbye" in northern. I did forget "your" (edited), thanks.
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(08-01-2020, 02:05 AM)Exit Wrote:  
(07-31-2020, 07:36 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote:  What is the meaning of the title? What is tetaa? One minor mistake though, on the third line, you forgot to put your instead of you. Anyway this a strange poem. You say you're a god, your a child, and then your dead, why?

Tetaa means "goodbye" in northern. I did forget "your" (edited), thanks. 

You say you're a god, your a child, and then your dead, why?

Nihilism. You live and learn, then you die and forget it all.

Nihilism is such a depressing word.
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