In Your Second Favorite Dream
#1
In Your Second Favorite Dream

you pinch yourself
to confirm it's real
and accept the sting
as an objective yea

never noticing the nay
of a dream-hand
that pinches with six fingers
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#2
can i share your meds Big Grin
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#3
like this one. do you think you could add more punch to that last line if you took out the "dream" in "dream-hand"?
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#4
Fun lol. Wondered what it would be like if N failed to notice the pinch which caused by the sting had 6 fingers?

Somehow this brings Ray Bradbury to mind....
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot
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