Thy Neighbour
#1
Thy Neighbour

Louis next door is an ass.

He's got his boys over
shot-gunning beers
belching 
spitting,
talking shit 
and pissing off the fucking porch.

From my bedroom we can see 
their little peckers under the swag 
of plastic tiki lamps
like it's a low-budget reality show.

We pop corn and binge-watch
till the party's over,
his wife and I.
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#2
hehe, good twist. if i were giving feedback i'd say don't do an edit.
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#3
Wicked good. (g)


Edit: Wicked good. (X)
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
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#4
Nice ending. Makes L1 funny even.
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