Edit 1: Beginners
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Beginners

froglets gathered from the muddy edges
of a pond where a retriever swims
knows initial hasty strokes of wonder
ink and paint in being carcasses
as well as they'd know children's tears

we frakcher learn craft and smooth to 
frac
            ture 
one last time
to feel an echo of the tears from when
retrievers swam



First Draft: Ignorance

froglets captured from the muddy edges
of a pond where a retriever swims
knows initial hasty strokes of wonder
ink and paint in being carcasses
as well as they'd know children's tears

we frakcher learn craft and smooth to 
frac
            ture one last time
to feel the tears from when
retrievers swam

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