03-02-2018, 03:26 AM
This is a poem I wrote for my english class. The goal was to follow a rhythm and meter. My poem is in dactylic tetrameter, and its called Wasted lines. Feedback and suggestions welcome. I hope you enjoy.
"Wasted Lines"
So many times I've wrote the same rhyme.
Way too much time spent on just the same line.
Too many songs that I wrote about her.
Too many lines that continue to burn.
Stolen so many great lines that I wrote.
So many lines now that I cannot quote.
Cave or a slave are both ways that I've felt.
Ten thousand lines all wrapped under my belt.
So many times I have wrote the same rhyme.
Used like I was when she told me goodbye.
Used to write songs that are just about birds.
Now I write songs that restate that Im hurt.
Count all the times that my heart has been broke.
Count all the times like your counting the votes.
Slave in a cave all according to felt .
Made all the same, every page is my hell.
"Wasted Lines"
So many times I've wrote the same rhyme.
Way too much time spent on just the same line.
Too many songs that I wrote about her.
Too many lines that continue to burn.
Stolen so many great lines that I wrote.
So many lines now that I cannot quote.
Cave or a slave are both ways that I've felt.
Ten thousand lines all wrapped under my belt.
So many times I have wrote the same rhyme.
Used like I was when she told me goodbye.
Used to write songs that are just about birds.
Now I write songs that restate that Im hurt.
Count all the times that my heart has been broke.
Count all the times like your counting the votes.
Slave in a cave all according to felt .
Made all the same, every page is my hell.