startled
#1
startled

i can dream
on dreams alone
for quite a while, but at some point
have to open my senses, soak in a new feeling.
sometimes i do not like what i perceive,
but then i´m relieved:
it can´t reach me here,
it was only reality.
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#2
"i can dream
on dreams alone"

love those lines
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#3
I love this and totally identify with the process: dream fueled dreams, living in the inner world because the real one is never as nice as the dream one, periodically having to contact the real world and wishing one didn't.   Big Grin   "I can dream on dreams alone" is the best line, but I also love the end, "It can't reach me here, it was only reality."  I just want to say,  that is exactly it!
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#4
It works as whimsy. I'm assuming it was not meant as anything else.
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#5
(11-13-2017, 02:54 PM)3zu Wrote:  It works as whimsy. I'm assuming it was not meant as anything else.

that is very perceptive of you.
i assume that´s all you wanted to say.
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#6
That's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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