Now I've Seen Everything
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Now I’ve Seen Everything
 
you in those beaten jeans
mouthing the words
to Rhianna’s Rude Boy
in our kitchen—
 
your hips

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Big Grin Now that's a love poem.
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(06-28-2017, 07:40 AM)ellajam Wrote:  Big Grin Now that's a love poem.

Best response to a poem ever.  big hug

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(06-28-2017, 07:10 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Now I’ve Seen Everything
 
you in those beaten jeans
mouthing the words
to Rhianna’s Rude Boy
in our kitchen—
 
your hips

Fantastic imagery, definitely compliments your other poem The Wife. Again something almost anyone could relate to.
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