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                                                İmage
   

                                                                    < old love >
   
                                                        i remember when we first met
   
                                                          looking between your legs
   
                                                        wanting what was down there
   

                                                                        still do
   
                                                                          - - -
   

   
    Image: Famous Helen Mirren at 69 photograph (Is it cheating to use Helen Mirren. Yes.)
    (Does Helen Mirren dilute the intent of the poem? Yes.)

    While criticism is not required, it is sincerely to be hoped for. (Off or On-topic remarks and clever abuse are appreciated as well.)
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No, I don't think it's cheating or diluting to use an example of someone who is aging particularly well, the same way seeing the "perfect" young body didn't make me less passionate for what I had at home then.
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