Another scansion question
#1
Being from Texas, the line,

I was cutting brush at midday, when I saw

reads with an ellision, as in,

I'as cutting brush at midday, when I saw

Is that fair, or should I rewrite it to be actually proper?
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#2
(01-08-2014, 10:43 AM)crow Wrote:  Being from Texas, the line,

I was cutting brush at midday, when I saw

reads with an ellision, as in,

I'as cutting brush at midday, when I saw

Is that fair, or should I rewrite it to be actually proper?

Iwas CUTting BRUSHat MIDday WHENi SAW

trochaic pentameter with a masculine ending no subs
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