(01-28-2023, 06:10 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  Words ruin this
pain immortalized
on faces.

Endure, march
over their graves

But that won't fix this-
this perfect tragedy.
Hi slicer-not sure what event you're referring to on 1/27.  That said, I really like the opening line.  Not sure that second person 'you' is working for such a personal observation, though.  As you can see, above, I took liberties...

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1/27 - by Semicircle - 01-28-2023, 06:10 AM
RE: 1/27 - by Mark A Becker - 01-29-2023, 03:56 AM
RE: 1/27 - by Semicircle - 02-09-2023, 06:20 AM

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