02-07-2023, 03:05 AM
made a second edit. can't seem to stop this from getting longer and longer. thanks for everyone who's given this a read
in particular TqB for all your comments, which clearly have been vastly helpful. to clarify on the line 'yet still fully formed in its image' - does it make more sense if you consider the narrator as the baby, and the 'you/your' subject as their mother? I tried to make this distinction more clear in my edit
thanks 71degrees as well, though I have decided to keep "very". I like the lack of specificity in this context. though that may be a questionable decision.
in particular TqB for all your comments, which clearly have been vastly helpful. to clarify on the line 'yet still fully formed in its image' - does it make more sense if you consider the narrator as the baby, and the 'you/your' subject as their mother? I tried to make this distinction more clear in my edit
thanks 71degrees as well, though I have decided to keep "very". I like the lack of specificity in this context. though that may be a questionable decision.