The Primitive Church
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(05-09-2021, 10:49 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  
(05-09-2021, 08:24 AM)Majestic Sun Wrote:  I thought I made the ending clear, is it about whether or not I should work in a church?
I guess I meant specifically a different last line:

So I continue to squabble with my dilemma
like a broom without a handle.

Strictly throwing that out as an example.  I'm sure you can come up with something more relevant to your poem.
What do you mean something more relevant?


Messages In This Thread
The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 04:30 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 07:44 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 08:24 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 10:49 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-10-2021, 10:29 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by CRNDLSM - 05-09-2021, 10:28 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-10-2021, 09:51 PM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-11-2021, 05:19 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2021, 05:27 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by newmystic - 05-15-2021, 03:04 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 03:59 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 07:10 AM



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