The Primitive Church
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(05-09-2021, 08:24 AM)Majestic Sun Wrote:  I thought I made the ending clear, is it about whether or not I should work in a church?
I guess I meant specifically a different last line:

So I continue to squabble with my dilemma
like a broom without a handle.

Strictly throwing that out as an example.  I'm sure you can come up with something more relevant to your poem.


Messages In This Thread
The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 04:30 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 07:44 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 08:24 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 10:49 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-10-2021, 10:29 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by CRNDLSM - 05-09-2021, 10:28 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-10-2021, 09:51 PM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-11-2021, 05:19 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2021, 05:27 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by newmystic - 05-15-2021, 03:04 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 03:59 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 07:10 AM



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