we don't like this kind of feedback in a workshop

[peacejazzspirit]

Oh for writing I think technical skills are very important. I just don't think they produce the most useful comments.

So I could say,

Milo, there should be a semicolon after important instead of a period!

or I could say,

Milo, I think you could have phrased the last sentence in a more interesting way, perhaps: "I think they are monopolizing space in which more valuable comments could reside." Or something to that tune.