we don't like this kind of feedback in a workshop
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(09-22-2015, 12:09 PM)milo Wrote:  Oh for writing I think technical skills are very important. I just don't think they produce the most useful comments.
So I could say,

Milo, there should be a semicolon after important instead of a period!

or I could say,

Milo, I think you could have phrased the last sentence in a more interesting way, perhaps: "I think they are monopolizing space in which more valuable comments could reside." Or something to that tune.
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RE: we don't like this kind of feedback in a workshop - by peacejazzspirit - 09-22-2015, 12:21 PM



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