we don't like this kind of feedback in a workshop
as a rule, we don't like the following kind of feedback in a workshop; [you can read it/them in the following posts]

if you were giving comments on a football match or pair of tits you'd know what to say; if you discussing a film or piece of music you'd know what to say.

you we can all be expert critics at a dinner table but when it comes to giving feedback on poetry our lips become magically sealed. mmmm mmmm what do i know etc etc ad-infinitum. well from now on inane feedback that helps nobody, will be placed here and discussed over and ad-infinitum [I thought that was rather fuckin' clever of meself]

Quote:Wilbur Wrote:  I don't really have any technical knowledge of poetry, so I can't comment on that, but I thought this was a powerful and beautifully expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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we don't like this kind of feedback in a workshop - by billy - 09-22-2015, 10:44 AM

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