02-03-2023, 05:32 AM
Hello again Tim-
I still think the original version only required some minor changes, to make it even more potent.
I certainly understand wanting to get on with life beyond grief, but matters of the heart do bubble to the surface. I hope that writing about it helps open up an avenue toward healing for you.
I try to smile as I hold loved ones in my memory, yet still struggle with specific dates and times. I find those feelings immensely difficult to articulate. I believe your original piece resonated with me in that regard.
Mark
I still think the original version only required some minor changes, to make it even more potent.
I certainly understand wanting to get on with life beyond grief, but matters of the heart do bubble to the surface. I hope that writing about it helps open up an avenue toward healing for you.
I try to smile as I hold loved ones in my memory, yet still struggle with specific dates and times. I find those feelings immensely difficult to articulate. I believe your original piece resonated with me in that regard.
Mark