Rain Light - edit2
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It’s raining heavily here even as I read this poem. And like the writer, I am delighting in the fact of being within strong walls on a day such as this.
That said, I don’t see what purpose the last strophe serves. It’s a comical kind of gloating that would make sense only if there was any hint that the narrator was not the poet, and didn’t have the poet’s sympathies.

Enjoyed the rest of the poem
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Rain Light - edit2 - by dukealien - 08-16-2022, 05:00 AM
RE: Rain Light - by TranquillityBase - 08-16-2022, 10:12 AM
RE: Rain Light - by busker - 08-16-2022, 10:31 PM
RE: Rain Light - edit - by dukealien - 08-17-2022, 12:22 AM
RE: Rain Light - edit - by brynmawr1 - 08-17-2022, 10:50 AM
RE: Rain Light - edit - by dukealien - 08-18-2022, 04:46 AM
RE: Rain Light - edit - by Wjames - 08-18-2022, 12:22 PM
RE: Rain Light - edit2 - by dukealien - 08-19-2022, 04:14 AM



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