(03-30-2022, 11:59 PM)Semicircle Wrote:  Our hands linked together
in a bitter cage.
I wish when I licked my finger,
you would let me turn the page.
I lament day to day
about the wars that we wage.

You should have let me turn the page.  maybe at the end, or not at all?

I killed you
in a frenzied rage.
Only, when I bit off my finger,   your  implies you use the other's finger to turn the page since they are dead.
would you turn the page.

Messages In This Thread
Blame - by Semicircle - 03-30-2022, 11:59 PM
RE: Blame - by TranquillityBase - 03-31-2022, 12:19 AM
RE: Blame - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2022, 09:29 AM
RE: Blame - by Semicircle - 05-18-2022, 11:13 PM
RE: Blame - by brynmawr1 - 05-19-2022, 03:55 AM

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