Hyenas, v2
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Hi notch-

This is an impressive, and compelling piece of work.  I only have one comment: I think you could title it Hyenas, or something that mentions hyenas.

Thanks for this one. It really made me think.
Mark
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Hyenas, v2 - by RiverNotch - 11-19-2021, 03:23 PM
RE: Sestina - by Beowulf - 11-22-2021, 05:59 AM
RE: Sestina - by RiverNotch - 11-27-2021, 01:10 PM
RE: Sestina - by Knot - 11-28-2021, 10:13 PM
RE: Sestina - by CRNDLSM - 11-30-2021, 11:09 AM
RE: Sestina, v2 - by RiverNotch - 11-24-2022, 09:32 PM
RE: Sestina, v2 - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2023, 06:45 AM



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