After her fall (edit 3)

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After her fall (edit 3)

Leaf

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#10

04-08-2021, 05:52 AM

"This time,"
Leaf typed,
"I hope to have made
further improvements --

but I'm open to
further suggestions
as to how to improve
my work."

Thanks again, Mark. I agree that short poems are pretty tricky. And... breathe.

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After her fall (edit 3) - by Leaf - 04-04-2021, 02:32 AM

RE: [untitled] - by TranquillityBase - 04-04-2021, 03:06 AM

RE: [untitled] - by Mark A Becker - 04-04-2021, 07:10 AM

RE: [untitled] - by busker - 04-04-2021, 09:17 AM

RE: [untitled] - by Leaf - 04-05-2021, 04:39 AM

RE: After her fall (edit 1) - by Leaf - 04-06-2021, 05:10 AM

RE: After her fall (edit 1) - by Mark A Becker - 04-06-2021, 07:11 AM

RE: After her fall (edit 2) - by Leaf - 04-07-2021, 03:55 AM

RE: After her fall (edit 2) - by Mark A Becker - 04-07-2021, 09:06 AM

RE: After her fall (edit 3) - by Leaf - 04-08-2021, 05:52 AM

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