Philosophy Podcast
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I really like the message of this poem. I feel there are some word choices that are very obvious and would love to see this with more story telling or some metaphors, something to really put the reader in the poem. The flow suits the message very well.


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Philosophy Podcast - by ComposerMike - 05-14-2020, 08:23 AM
RE: Philosophy Podcast - by lilleahj - 05-16-2020, 11:37 PM



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