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03-29-2019, 04:21 PM
on another reading i see you're right.

(03-28-2019, 09:27 PM)rowens Wrote:  It was come second. Then I changed it back to came. Came makes it more definite and unchangeable that we were never from the same world.
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Two - by rowens - 03-28-2019, 06:06 AM
RE: Two - by billy - 03-28-2019, 11:41 AM
RE: Two - by rowens - 03-28-2019, 09:27 PM
RE: Two - by billy - 03-29-2019, 04:21 PM
RE: Two - by dukealien - 03-28-2019, 10:50 PM
RE: Two - by rowens - 03-29-2019, 06:03 AM



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