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It never rained on Thursday.
My dog just upped and died.
It never rained on Thursday
'cos he always stayed inside.

It never rained on Tuesday
My sister upped and died.
It never rained on Tuesday
'cos she always stayed inside.
I don't know if this is your intention, but that poem struck me as really, really eerie. In a good way.
i have no idea why i wrote it Sad
Very creep :c
what can i say...it was raining when i wrote it Big Grin