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'You're judgmental and you generalise'
'So?'
'You can't do that, you just don't realise'
'No?'
'You always mock the Turner Prize!'
'Oh!'

'You won't even read the latest book!'
'I won't?'
'You don't give music a second look.'
'I don't?'
'And all the trouble that Mother took -'
"Goal!"
I see what you mean. (Am I allowed to say 'I loved this'? I am? Okay then, I loved this) It doesn't fit into any format that I know of, which is why I do. I wrote something once, each verse being the rant of a man and then a women....basically showing that they are indeed from Mars and from Venus.
'Football' getting in the way of communication? Haha nice one. Reminds me a little bit of 'I'm Gonna Miss Her' (only that he is distracted too)
WinkI see what you mean. (Am I allowed to say 'I loved this'? I am? Okay then, I loved this) It doesn't fit into any format that I know of, which is why I do. I wrote something once, each verse being the rant of a man and then a women....basically showing that they are indeed from Mars and from Venus.

Jill.........You are allowed to say that. I know, because I asked Leanne, and she said so, it being on the Fun thread....there again, she was talking about her own work...hmmmm..... The battle of the sexes is fertile ground, if only because apart from anything else, they speak different languages.

'Football' getting in the way of communication? Haha nice one. Reminds me a little bit of 'I'm Gonna Miss Her' (only that he is distracted too

Mark.....I remember laughing when I wrote this. I envisaged the woman as having opined that the ideal moment to 'talk things through' was just as The Match was getting underway...Wink
That seems to be a common trend with the ladies. Discussions that just can't wait, always seem to happen when the championship is on the line Big Grin
you sir are on a role Big Grin