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these winds are welcome--
pushing back at arctic air
like a big brother
(02-08-2023, 05:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: [ -> ]these winds are welcome--
pushing back at arctic air
like a big brother

HA! Good one, Paul.  Interesting metaphor, and the emphasis on these makes an important difference, implying warm winds. 

Funny that I just finished one that is similar:

from hard winter rain
it was a welcome reprieve -
your smile, like summer