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A mossy stump
Sees itself in its dreams
A green young tree.

nicely done ris
This is one of my favourites by you. I love how you convey a world of messages through such short, staccato lines.
Well done and Thank you.
It felt full of encouragement.
It's a one-syllable short haiku, and it's nice. My reply:

A young sapling
growing near a stump
gasps from the breadth
Hi, friends, thanks for reading and comments!
Verbavore - yep, very good! I like it!