01-28-2023, 06:10 AM
01-29-2023, 03:56 AM
(01-28-2023, 06:10 AM)Semicircle Wrote: [ -> ]Words ruin this
silence
bloodsoaked
pain immortalized
on faces.
Endure, march
over their graves
But that won't fix this-
this perfect tragedy.
Hi slicer-not sure what event you're referring to on 1/27. That said, I really like the opening line. Not sure that second person 'you' is working for such a personal observation, though. As you can see, above, I took liberties...
Mark
02-09-2023, 06:20 AM
Thanks Mark. This poem was made in regard to the holocaust. I had never written on it.