Poetry Forum

Oral Sex

I love how you bite
your lip when you smile,
and the way you say,
“I’m coming.”

(01-20-2023, 06:26 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: [ -> ]Oral Sex

I love how you bite
your lip when you smile,
and the way you say,
“I’m coming.”

Good line break in L1.  Actually made me wince the first time I read it.

(01-26-2023, 06:38 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: [ -> ]

(01-20-2023, 06:26 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: [ -> ]Oral Sex

I love how you bite
your lip when you smile,
and the way you say,
“I’m coming.”

Good line break in L1.  Actually made me wince the first time I read it.

Thanks Steve-
This one’s actually more about a sexy mouth and voice rather than the sexual act, but you wouldn’t know that unless I let on.  Works for either interpretation though. That’s why I put it in the FUN forum. Could've called it 'Tongue In Cheek', but that wouldn't have been much fun.
Mark