Poetry Forum

(03-19-2015, 01:40 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: [ -> ]

(03-18-2015, 03:18 PM)New_World Wrote: [ -> ]just wanted to say hi.
1st post.
*sigh*
bye

nice.

man if that stick person had huge tits, it would be me.  Opps, we're not in the sewer.=\

I mean HIIIII new people...don't look in the jacuzzi and don't comment on the smell of death in novice....
these are all normal things, and no we don't really kill newbs here, those are just nasty rumors.  

Welcome welcome drink this koolaid.


mel./bena

(03-22-2015, 04:06 AM)bena Wrote: [ -> ]man if that stick person had huge tits, it would be me.  Opps, we're not in the sewer.=\

I mean HIIIII new people...don't look in the jacuzzi and don't comment on the smell of death in novice....
these are all normal things, and no we don't really kill newbs here, those are just nasty rumors.  

Welcome welcome drink this koolaid.
mel./bena

               

                                    (And welcome again... now where's that rabbit hole?)

Just wanted to say hi to everyone.... I am a creeper poet, not even sure that does it justice. But in my struggles with life, I write. poems? not sure if they are poems. and I have never shared them to people before, and was trying to find a way to let people read them and give me their thoughts on it. I'm an 100% Introvert, which doesn't help at all in many circumstances. But sometimes you you have to lay the foundation of courage somewhere before you can stand proud with it.

hi and welcome to the site, keep up with the feedback as you post your own work, you'll be surprised how much it helps you and others.

(03-26-2015, 05:59 PM)SaddestStates Wrote: [ -> ]Just wanted to say hi to everyone.... I am a creeper poet, not even sure that does it justice. But in my struggles with life, I write. poems? not sure if they are poems. and I have never shared them to people before, and was trying to find a way to let people read them and give me their thoughts on it. I'm an 100% Introvert, which doesn't help at all in many circumstances. But sometimes you you have to lay the foundation of courage somewhere before you can stand proud with it.

Hi. Max, here. Been fringing for a while before signing on and will continue to Fringe for a while yet. Will try a poem here and there in time and a critique or two. But don't expect much, I'm not very good at either

(03-26-2015, 09:48 PM)maxwellbosche Wrote: [ -> ]Hi. Max, here. Been fringing for a while before signing on and will continue to Fringe for a while yet. Will try a poem here and there in time and a critique or two. But don't expect much, I'm not very good at either

Hi, Max, welcome. This is a workshop so anyone interested in improving is in the right place, as long as you're willing to give just a bit more than you take.
Critiques get better with practice, if you need some tips you'll find them in the important threads of the Novice workshop. Jump in when you're ready.

most of us (the one's who wish to improve) feel the same. it's why many are here.

(03-26-2015, 09:48 PM)maxwellbosche Wrote: [ -> ]Hi. Max, here. Been fringing for a while before signing on and will continue to Fringe for a while yet. Will try a poem here and there in time and a critique or two. But don't expect much, I'm not very good at either

Hello I am Freya, I am a media art student from Hong Kong. English is my second language so I am not really good at it, but I am trying to improve my language skill. I like to write poem sometimes, but there is only a few people I knew who are interested in writing. I wish that I can get more review and critiques here, and I will try my best to learn more from others.

Hi to Max and Saddest - good to see you on board.

hi freya.

you're language skills seem better than mine
we;come to the site.

(03-28-2015, 05:45 PM)kwokfreya Wrote: [ -> ]Hello I am Freya, I am a media art student from Hong Kong. English is my second language so I am not really good at it, but I am trying to improve my language skill. I like to write poem sometimes, but there is only a few people I knew who are interested in writing. I wish that I can get more review and critiques here, and I will try my best to learn more from others.

Hi I am Benjamin Hitler, (not at all related to the evil Nazi guy, just an unfortunate name change on my grandparents' part one night when they were drunk) I like poems and stuff, and I think all you guys deserve a hung because I love you all (for some reason I'm crying as I write this now) so yeah I'll see ya around

(04-01-2015, 04:25 PM)Hitler Wrote: [ -> ]Hi I am Benjamin Hitler, (not at all related to the evil Nazi guy, just an unfortunate name change on my grandparents' part one night when they were drunk)  I like poems and stuff, and I think all you guys deserve a hug because I love you all (for some reason I'm crying as I write this now) so yeah I'll see ya around

Crying is a good sign, it either means that you are overly emotional, which denotes poetic
potential; or that you are mentally ill, which denotes same. We have plenty of each and both,
so consider yourself welcomed and a member of the PigPen cohort.

Ray

P.S. I'm just named Heinrich and I got a lot of snide Nazi remarks thrown at me; I can't imagine being
named Hitler...  BUT, like in Johnny Cash's song "A Boy Named Sue", such adversity has helped
you build a strong character (as well, possibly, mental illness).  

(04-01-2015, 04:25 PM)Hitler Wrote: [ -> ]Hi I am Benjamin Hitler, (not at all related to the evil Nazi guy, just an unfortunate name change on my grandparents' part one night when they were drunk)  I like poems and stuff, and I think all you guys deserve a hung because I love you all (for some reason I'm crying as I write this now) so yeah I'll see ya around

welcome to the pen.
i hope you enjoy your stack of fresh onion sandwiches.

Hi Ben, Don't worry, I'll send you some hummingbirds on toast...with seven onion jelly :p

dale

H-hey everyone~! I'm quite shy but I like to express myself through writing. I've written a lot of poetry over the years, especially during those angsty teenage years at school lol. But I'm here primarily because I want to improve my skills in certain forms of poetry, for example: haiku. I hope we will get along nicely, and when I'm not giving feedback, I'll probably only be posting my works in serious critique thread... so... please don't make me cry too much! Nice to meet you all~!

If you post in serious, you'll don't need to worry about crying. Evisceration, perhaps, but no tears.
Looking forward to reading your work..

bena/mel.

Actually, we've had our tear ducts surgically removed. Hello wanderlust, welcome to the site!

Ahah, clearly I have nothing to worry about then~!

Thanks for your warm-yet-slightly-scary welcome!

(04-10-2015, 12:08 AM)wanderlust Wrote: [ -> ]Ahah, clearly I have nothing to worry about then~!

Thanks for your warm-yet-slightly-scary welcome!

Please enjoy a fresh onion sandwich.