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Seduction Technique
 
She was beautiful,
I wanted her.
I had been to the class
so
I pulled the seduction technique
no woman can resist…
My wallet.
 
 
–Erthona
 
 
©2015
Hey Dale. I like "so" on its own line - Works well read aloud. The dual use of "pulled" is a nice touch also.
Nice one, Paul.
Thanks Paul.

Dale

tomcrocus

Hi,
a witty little ditty and never a truer word spoken,
even if it is said in jest.
Tom.
can't beat a bit of brass...unless you pay for it Wink
Keep your money and all you've got,
the mansion on the shore and yacht.
Stuff comes with maintenance and worry,
it may tempt some but just bores me.
Your wallet may be rich and fat
but not all girls will fall for that.

oink
Ah famous last words. snicker

dale


"doink" --Homer Simpson
Wait, the speaker needed a class just to learn that?
we only need one Blush

(01-25-2015, 12:00 AM)ellajam Wrote: [ -> ]Keep your money and all you've got,
the mansion on the shore and yacht.
Stuff comes with maintenance and worry,
it may tempt some but just bores me.
Your wallet may be rich and fat
but not all girls will fall for that.

oink
"Wait, the speaker needed a class just to learn that?"

I dunno, I saw it on "criminal minds." The classes to learn that, that is.



Billy Thumbsup 

 
"There's enough dumb fish in the sea to do.
They may not all be tuna,
but I can get used to eating cod. 
It's better than Moby's Dick."  -- Ahab

dale
Does it still work if my wallet is empty?
(01-25-2015, 10:17 PM)brandontoh Wrote: [ -> ]Does it still work if my wallet is empty?

Sure, it's all about the illusion, baby.
Yeah, all that really needs to happen is that she thinks you are rich, after all you probably only want to use her once. Or as some rapper has undoubtedly at some point said.

s'bout getten da bitch
in da bed!
maken sure
she give good head,
if she don'
then make her dead,
that is what
I alwaz said.

Ah the world of romance. C'est la vie!

dale