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Make the wrong choice-
that is right, or
make the right one, and
watch it become a mistake;
in a blink of an eye.

whatispoetry?

This is an interesting take on the whole "Two roads diverged..." but the last line is weak because it's a cliche and the line breaks here could also use some work, I think. "or" or "and" are generally not good places to break a line.