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- Whippoorwill (rewritten) (7 Replies)
- What is this Naked Thing? (13 Replies)
- On Break (Edited) (4 Replies)
- I don't know if I should toss this out or try to tighten it up.. But it was fun! (6 Replies)
- Now I see sunrays in my eyes (2 Replies)
- Young Folks in Love (8 Replies)
- Youth (2 Replies)
- A Trip In Your Library (5 Replies)
- Entitled #1 (and his Realtime Monologue) (8 Replies)
- Under the Porch Light (24 Replies)
- Wanderers, Part One (6 Replies)
- (for Tom) Recourseless Regrets (5 Replies)
- Alone (5 Replies)
- Student (6 Replies)
- Dragon flight (for Marianne ) (13 Replies)
- violent sunrise on the island (11 Replies)
- He Lives To Fight Another Day (8 Replies)
- My Shadow -edited (9 Replies)
- Noire (4 Replies)
- long dead and best forgotten (6 Replies)
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