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- Second Edit: dying thoughts (11 Replies)
- Second Edit: Defeat/Disenfranchised (6 Replies)
- First Edit: My Friend Back Home (5 Replies)
- First Edit: Wandering (10 Replies)
- First name (5 Replies)
- cherished (14 Replies)
- finally, a peace of mind (4 Replies)
- Falling Toward Grace (6 Replies)
- Loser (6 Replies)
- Kiting (edited) (14 Replies)
- Through the Layers (2 Replies)
- Fiddler Crab (revised) (4 Replies)
- Armagh (3 Replies)
- First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging (12 Replies)
- Mania (3 Replies)
- First Edit: poems (4 Replies)
- No seagull feel (6 Replies)
- Circumstances (4 Replies)
- Brisco Country Junior Cave's misadventures the rapeaing (2 Replies)
- No Sunshine. (6 Replies)
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